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Describe a change in the past few years in your city.

Describe a change in the past few years in your city. ElLx3
I would like to talk about instructral changes that took place in my hometown Tehran in past few years. one of them is construction of buildings in my city that had happened in good climate area and good view to jungles and far from pullotion and one of them is develop transportation system that add more metro to subway system and renew taxi’s cars and add more bus stops and after that. I can say some reason for this one of them is lack of accommodation for people in my system thas is the cause of building in my city and after that is the long waiting hour for people in the metro station. Challenges for municipality was lack of fund for develop subway system and offcource it takes lot time to all of this take place Offcource all of this change had many benefits for our city and the future of our city gauranty with this decision
I would like to talk about
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instructral
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changes
that took place in my hometown Tehran in past few years.
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one
of them is construction of buildings in my city that had happened in
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good
climate area and
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good
view to jungles and far from
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pullotion
and one of them is
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develop
transportation
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system
that
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add
more metro to subway
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system
and renew taxi’s cars and
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add
more bus
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stops
and after that.

I can say
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some
reason for this one of them is lack of accommodation for
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people
in my
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system
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thas
is the cause of building in my city and after
that is
the long waiting hour for
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people
in the metro station.

Challenges for municipality was lack of fund for develop subway
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system
and
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offcource
it takes lot time to all of this take place

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Offcource
all of this
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change
had
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many
benefits for our city and the future of our city
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gauranty
with this decision

IELTS essay Describe a change in the past few years in your city.

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