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The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. rW6p
The authorities should reimburse the tuition fees for everyone who desires to more study after high-secondary school. If questioned, I agree with this notion to a major extent. My preference is explained in the ensuing paragraphs. out of several arguments, the foremost one to support my opinion is that lawmakers provide financial supports for the students. In other words, those students who have a willingness to more study after secondary school, which authorities provide financial support and so on students carry out further study and get admission from the prestigious university. Unlike earlier, pupils had been less choice available for their carrier orientation aspects, but now they have a variety of choices available for their academic institutions. The legislative body contributes their loan and brings less amount of interest after the completion of university education. Therefore, scholar carrier would be strong in forthcoming time which they give opportunities in job aspects and country become good progress. Moreover, statutory body new inaugural by universities. To elaborate, those areas will have fewer academic institutions which government new established universities and contribute their free of education. Then, more students would participate in these universities and become increasing their mind set which would have better job opportunities and also good lifestyles. For example, German authorities always provide free education after the completion of school-goers. As a result, in time more and more engineers, doctors, the technician would have been outside the market after the accomplish. Nevertheless, I could not overlook the opposite side, too. Mainly, it is undeniable fact that if we get something for free, we don't have value for money. In some cases, those non -serious students who have not completed their education in the academic institution might be government money is wasted. To conclude, although the government provides free education, I maintain that it is a completely valuable decision by authorities such as financial support, loan, funding for their pupils and become good proficiency achievement.
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should reimburse the tuition fees for everyone who desires to more study after high-secondary school. If questioned, I
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with this notion to a major extent. My preference is
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explained
in the ensuing paragraphs.

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out
of several arguments, the foremost one to
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support
my opinion is that lawmakers
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financial
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supports
for the
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students
.
In other words
, those
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students
who have a willingness to more study after secondary school, which
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authorities
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provide
financial
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support
and
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on
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students
carry out
further
study and
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get
admission from the prestigious
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university
. Unlike earlier, pupils had been less choice available for their carrier orientation aspects,
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but
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now
they have a variety of choices available for their academic institutions. The legislative body contributes their loan and brings less amount of interest after the completion of
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university
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education
.
Therefore
, scholar carrier would be strong in forthcoming time which they give opportunities in job aspects and country become
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good
progress.

Moreover
, statutory body new inaugural by
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universities
. To elaborate, those areas will have fewer academic institutions which
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government
new established
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universities
and contribute their
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free
of
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education
. Then, more
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students
would participate in these
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universities
and become increasing their mind set which would have better job opportunities and
also
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good
lifestyles.
For example
, German
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authorities
always
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provide
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free
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education
after the completion of school-goers.
As a result
, in time more and more engineers, doctors, the technician would have been outside the market after
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Nevertheless
, I could not overlook the opposite side, too.
Mainly
, it is undeniable fact that if we
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get
something for
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, we don't have value for money. In
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some
cases, those non -serious
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students
who have not completed their
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education
in the academic institution might be
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government
money
is wasted
.

To conclude
, although the
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government
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provides
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free
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education
, I maintain that it is a completely valuable decision by
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authorities
such as financial
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support
, loan, funding for their pupils and become
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good
proficiency achievement.
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IELTS essay The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
324 words
6.5
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