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The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what do you agree or disagree with this statement.

The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what 2Nr6
In today's fast paced life, access to education is the source of economic and social growth for the children of every country. Education is the basis of progress in every aspect of a country. It is assumed that every student who wants to study at the university must pay the entire fee through the government. However, the concept of paying fees is somewhat correct, I think the authority should take this step for those who are not able to afford university fees. To begin with, paying for infant's higher tutoring through the regime has many benefits for our society. There is no denying that knowledge promotes the mental development of juveniles, as well as the emergence of new thinking in them, which enables them to solve every future problem facing the country with great insight and patience, that eventually leads to the development of society. Undoubtedly, some people, like students, are born with infinite skills within themselves, but due to financial constraints, they are not able to use their knowledge properly because the parents of such juveniles are not capable of sending their toddlers to higher education. As a result, children do not get the guidance of experienced teachers, and they do not get a good place in life without recognizing their inner skills. For example, a number of foreign countries like Norway, is providing free education to its citizens to help them grow better in life without taking care of gigantic expenses of study. Admittedly, if the authority bears all the burden of guidance of such helpless infants on its shoulders, then something important like schooling can benefit the juveniles consequently, will be able to contribute more to the country's development. However, those who are able to educate their children should get them educated there selves, with the government having money from its exchequer to deal with other national problems such as unemployment, corruption, etc. The country as a whole will be able to develop. To conclude, it is apparent that the regime should provide financial assistance for university education to those students who are deprived of guidance due to financial crises, whereas those people who are able to provide higher tutoring to their children, must impart good knowledge to their teenagers without government assistance from all quarters because only with an educated society will the country become educated and prosper.
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today
's
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fast
paced life, access to
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education
is the source of economic and social growth for the
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children
of every
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country
.
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Education
is the basis of progress in every aspect of a
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country
. It
is assumed
that every student
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who
wants to study at the university
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must
pay the entire fee through the
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government
.
However
, the concept of paying fees is somewhat correct, I
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think
the authority should take this step for those
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who
are not
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able
to afford university fees.

To
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begin
with, paying for infant's higher tutoring through the regime has
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many
benefits for our society. There is no denying that knowledge promotes the mental development of juveniles,
as well
as the emergence of new thinking in them, which enables them to solve every future problem facing the
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country
with great insight and patience, that
eventually
leads to the development of society.
Undoubtedly
,
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some
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people
, like students,
are born
with infinite
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skills
within themselves,
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but
due to financial constraints, they are not
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able
to
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use
their knowledge
properly
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because
the parents of such juveniles are not capable of sending their toddlers to higher
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education
.
As a result
,
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children
do not
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get
the guidance of experienced teachers, and they do not
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get
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
place in life without recognizing their inner
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
For example
, a number of foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
like Norway, is providing free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
to its citizens to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them grow better in life without taking care of gigantic expenses of study.

Admittedly
, if the authority bears all the burden of guidance of such helpless infants on its shoulders, then something
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
like schooling can benefit the juveniles
consequently
, will be
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able
to contribute more to the country's development.
However
, those
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who
are
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able
to educate their
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children
should
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get
them educated there selves, with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
having money from its exchequer to deal with other national problems such as unemployment, corruption, etc. The
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country
as a whole will be
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able
to develop.

To conclude
, it is apparent that the regime should provide financial assistance for university
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education
to those students
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who
are deprived
of guidance due to financial crises, whereas those
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people
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who
are
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able
to provide higher tutoring to their
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children
,
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must
impart
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good
knowledge to their
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teenagers
without
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government
assistance from all quarters
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because
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only
with an educated society will the
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country
become educated and prosper.
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IELTS essay The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what

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