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The Government should invest more in education

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In my opinion, the state should invest more in education. Because we all know, education is always an issue that all countries care about, for a developing country like Vietnam - a country that pays great attention to education for the country's future preschoolers, should always be available for educational advice. Our state has investment and development consultants for education and can say that: "Policy investment in education is investment in development". The definition for education also includes policies to encourage and protect the legitimate rights and interests of domestic individuals and organizations, overseas Vietnamese, foreign organizations and individuals. Therefore, investment in education is an investment in development, and is the "golden key" to build an abundant and quality human resource, create competition in the domestic and international markets based on the growth of human resources. socio-economic growth of the country.

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