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Happiness about winter season

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I like vintaru sijan like coffee dreeng like slipping like vintar worm room like Hot food like i like My cuty iam haging Sewetar likeVintar sijan enjoying Zuring vintar taking to familyEating challenge gems Like kid showsWatching TV Siting out said like himLike chicken pakodi Like ice krim chlengeI want egg biriyani riding books phone using playing gems out said going I most like shaping enjoying this part
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like coffee
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worm room like Hot food like
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like My
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iam
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likeVintar
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sijan
enjoying
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vintar
taking to
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challenge gems Like kid
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TV Siting out said like
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chicken
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Like ice
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want egg
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riding books phone using playing gems out said going I most like shaping enjoying this part
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IELTS essay Happiness about winter season

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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