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The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. EGRL
These days most governments fund all most myriads of schools. So that when the time comes the advantageous perk can be used for great use. Despite, the substantial amount of governments which try to allocate both time and money on teaching sciences rather than other subjects which is a good factor because of how well the country can develop and progress for years to come. However, the payment should also be applied on other topics. In this essay, the topic will be explained to a greater extent.
These days most
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governments
fund all most myriads of schools.
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So
that when the time
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comes
the advantageous perk can be
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used
for great
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use
. Despite, the substantial amount of
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governments
which try to allocate both time and money on teaching sciences
rather
than other subjects which is a
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good
factor
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because
of how well the country can develop and progress for years to
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come
.
However
, the payment should
also
be applied
on other topics. In this essay, the topic will be
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explained
to a greater extent.
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IELTS essay The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.

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