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The good features of The English language

The good features of The English language NyyY0
As people know English is the most important thing in people's lives. I have been studying English for ten years. It helps improve my English skills and promotes me. English has become more popular in a big city because people have English skills to communicate with other people. It helps more and more confident when you interview in a company and application in the job. But learning English is not easy, you should be patient to learn every time, every day, even for a lifetime. Consequently, English is the most important thing in our lives to improve ourselves and boost our position in society. If you had not studied English, you could not improve yourself and earn much money to help your family and friends. Anymore, we have to learn English every day and even for a lifetime. We must study, study hard and study forever
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and promotes me. English has become more popular in a
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because
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people
have English
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skills
to communicate with other
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people
. It
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helps
more and more confident when you interview in a
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company
and application in the job.
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But
learning English is not easy, you should be patient to learn every time, every day, even for a lifetime.
Consequently
, English is the most
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important
thing in our
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lives
to
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improve
ourselves and boost our position in society. If you had not studied English, you could not
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improve
yourself and earn much money to
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help
your family and friends. Anymore, we
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have to
learn English every day and even for a lifetime. We
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study, study
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and study
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forever

IELTS essay The good features of The English language

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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