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With the strong development of the information technology, online learning is gradually becoming a solution to enhance the quality of education and training. Each person will have different perspectives about it because there are lots of differences between online learning and traditional learning. This essay will enlighten both virtually every aspect of this issue, both pros and cons. Online learning offers loads of considerable advantages to our life. Firsly, it helps everyone receive information easily with a computer, a tablet or even a phone with Internet connection. People will be more active in learning because they can take full advantages of their spare time to study anytime, anywhere instead of attending classes with fixed schedules. Secondly, compared with traditional learning at school, online learning is considered the best cost-effective solution. People are able to save travel expenses, money spent on school facilities or study documents, which are replaced with ebooks. Finally, online learning also makes a contribution to lessons’creativity and efficiency on the grounds that lecturers and teachers can use images, audios or videos to make lessons more attractive and vivid. Besides benefits, online learning brings people lots of serious drawbacks. Online classes will not amke sure that students have abilities to get the same interaction with other students and teachers. Moreover, online classess’ test can not assess exactly students’ capabilitis and qualifications after a course or a semester. Some students are not aware of the importance of self-consciousness and honesty so they just find ways to cheat on online examinations. Last but not least, there will be problems related to people’s network security and intellectual property rights during the study processes. In short, it is undeniable that online learning is not a great way for someone with difficult economic conditions, especially in the current Covid-19 era. However, if possible, everyone should try both online learning and traditional learning to achieve the best effects.
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and traditional
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. This essay will enlighten both
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every aspect of this issue, both pros and cons.

Online
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offers loads of considerable advantages to our life.
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Firsly
, it
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helps
everyone receive information
easily
with a computer, a tablet or even a phone with Internet connection.
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People
will be more active in
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learning
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because
they can take full advantages of their spare time to study anytime, anywhere
instead
of attending classes with
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fixed
schedules.
Secondly
, compared with traditional
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learning
at school,
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online
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learning
is considered
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are able to save travel expenses, money spent on school facilities or study documents, which
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.
Finally
,
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also
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makes
a contribution to lessons’creativity and efficiency on the grounds that lecturers and teachers can
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use
images, audios or videos to
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make
lessons more attractive and vivid.

Besides
benefits,
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online
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brings
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people
lots of serious drawbacks.
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classes will not
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amke
sure that
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students
have abilities to
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the same interaction with other
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students
and teachers.
Moreover
,
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can not assess exactly
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capabilitis
and qualifications after a course or a semester.
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Some
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students
are not aware of the importance of self-consciousness and honesty
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so
they
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just
find ways to cheat on
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online
examinations. Last
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but
not least, there will be problems related to
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people’s
network security and intellectual property rights during the study processes.

In short, it is undeniable that
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online
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learning
is not a great way for someone with difficult economic conditions,
especially
in the
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current
Covid-19 era.
However
, if possible, everyone should try both
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online
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learning
and traditional
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learning
to achieve the best effects.
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IELTS essay pros and cons of online learning

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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