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The given picture illustrates that the procedure of tomato ketchup with different

The given picture illustrates that the procedure of tomato ketchup with different Nymgy

The given picture illustrates that the procedure of tomato ketchup with different activities by workers. overall, it can be noticed that the whole process includes 15 steps to make sauce which is mainly starts from harvesting and finally finished with the packing and ready to sale in the market. First of all, tomatoes are picked and put it in the basket from the field by workers and then sorted them in good and bad in order to make sauce of better quality. After that, it is loaded into truck and send to the factory. Moreover, removes the skin, put out the seeds and wash them in container as well as to crush them properly. Furthermore, after mashing add other ingredients such as sugar, vinegar and salt accordingly. However, tomatoes are boiled and leave it for 2 hours. After cooling the sauce is put into the bottles then it is sent for labelling where check out the quality of ketchup for better selling in the market. If the sauces is made good then it is ready for final packing. last but not least, the whole packed material is delivered to the global market as due to people buy it from local shops to enjoy their junk food like hamburger and fries with tomato ketchup.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 picture illustrates that the procedure of tomato ketchup with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 activities by workers. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, it can be noticed
 that the whole process includes 15 steps to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflavoringgravyrelishdressing
sauce
 which is mainly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from harvesting and finally
 finished with the packing and ready to sale in the market. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, tomatoes are picked
 and put it in the basket from the field by workers and then sorted them in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflavoringgravyrelishdressing
sauce
 of better quality. After that, it is loaded
 into truck and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 to the factory. Moreover
, removes the skin, put out the seeds and wash them in container as well
 as to crush them properly
. Furthermore
, after mashing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 other ingredients such as sugar, vinegar and salt accordingly
. However
, tomatoes are boiled
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 it for 2 hours. After cooling the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflavoringgravyrelishdressing
sauce
is put
 into the bottles then it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 for labelling where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 out the quality of ketchup for better selling in the market. If the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflavoringgravyrelishdressing
sauces
is made
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 then it is ready for final packing. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLast
last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, the whole packed material is delivered
 to the global market as due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it from local shops to enjoy their junk food like hamburger and fries with tomato ketchup. 