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The given picture describes how to create ethanol fuel from corn.

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The given picture describes how to create ethanol fuel from corn. It is clear that the process has 8 steps, which starts with paring the corn and ends with delivering and selling ethanol fuel at the gas station. At the beginning of the process, the corn is pared. The process continues with being stored in the factory. The next step involves putting this corn into the mill to milling. After that, this is added the water and cooked in 4 hours. At the following stage, this mixture is fermented during 48 hours. After 4 steps below, the mixture is separated into 2 matters, which are liquid and solid by-product. At the sixth stage of the process, it is purified ethanol in 5 hours. The next step is stored this ethanol. Finally, the end products are shipped to the gas station and the ethanol fuel is sold there.
The
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describes
how to create
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ethanol
fuel from corn.

It is
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clear
that the
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process
has 8
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steps
, which
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starts
with paring the corn and ends with delivering and selling
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ethanol
fuel at the gas station.

At the beginning of the
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process
, the corn
is pared
. The
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process
continues with
being stored
in the factory. The
next
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step
involves putting this corn into the mill to milling. After that, this is
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added
the water and cooked in 4 hours. At the following stage, this mixture
is fermented
during 48 hours.

After 4
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steps
below, the mixture
is separated
into 2 matters, which are liquid and solid by-product. At the sixth stage of the
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process
, it
is purified
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ethanol
in 5 hours. The
next
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step
is stored
this
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ethanol
.
Finally
, the
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end
products
are shipped
to the gas station and the
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ethanol
fuel
is sold
there.
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IELTS essay The given picture describes how to create ethanol fuel from corn.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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