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SOme people think that media is having negative development.to what extent do you agree

SOme people think that media is having negative development. to what extent do you agree qk16w
Media plays a vital role to provide the information to the users. Nowdays media has become more powerful. Journalists, anchors and other parts are the soul to it. A fabric of society vehemently deems that media is leading to a negative development. this has become the topic of debate. in this essay i will discuss about if the media is having negative growth or not Foremost, media is the essential part of this world. without media we could not get the information what is happening around the globe. Media is of two types electric media or paper media. electric media is so powerful nowdays whereas newspapers varies to literacy rate of the people. in electronic media journalists move from one place to another to collect the data and can show to the people on channels live. Media is getting stronger day by day because of the technology drones can provide the information where it is dauting task for a person to go. actually media is like a backbone to the stand. world stand still because of the media it tells us about what are goverment strategies and wheather news also. media is working influently these days Secondly some people have opinion media is working is in the government hands. They work as the government wants them to. if this is true. This should not be happen. because people truly believe what they hear or read in the news so media should not be biased to any regime as the media holds the power to change the picture of everthing by their information To sum up media is major part of the society. It works for the people to aware them about the current trends. so i dont agree with the statement media is having negative progress.
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plays a vital role to provide the information to the users.
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Nowdays
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media
has become more powerful. Journalists, anchors and other parts are the soul to it. A fabric of society
vehemently
deems that
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media
is leading to a
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negative
development.
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this
has become the topic of debate.
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in
this essay
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i
will
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discuss about if
the
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media
is having
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negative
growth or
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not


Foremost,
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media
is the essential part of this world.
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without
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media we
could not
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get
the information what is happening around the globe.
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Media
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is
of two types electric
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media
or paper
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media
.
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electric
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media
is
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so
powerful
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nowdays
whereas newspapers varies to literacy rate of the
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people
.
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in
electronic
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media
journalists
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move
from one place to another to collect the data and can
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show
to the
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people
on channels
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live
.
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Media
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is
getting stronger day by day
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because
of the technology drones can provide the information where it is
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dauting
task for a person to go. actually
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media
is like a backbone to the stand.
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world
stand
still
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because
of the
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media
it
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tells
us about what are
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goverment
strategies and
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wheather
news
also
.
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media
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is
working
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influently
these
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days


Secondly
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some
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people
have opinion
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media
is working is in the
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government
hands. They work as the
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government
wants them to. if this is true. This should not be
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happen
.
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because
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people
truly
believe what they hear or read in the news
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so
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media
should not
be biased
to any regime as the
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media
holds the power to
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change
the picture of
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everthing
by their
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information


To sum up
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media
is major part of the society. It works for the
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people
to aware them about the
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current
trends.
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so
i
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dont
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agree
with the statement
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media
is having
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negative
progress.
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IELTS essay SOme people think that media is having negative development. to what extent do you agree

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