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Learning English during the pandemic period

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i think that pandemic period was very bad, on the ground that, quarantine was very hardly for all of people of world, since we could not learn english during the quarantine. on the one hand quarantine seems to be advantageous. firt and foremost, it is very effective for people temper, in other words, many people keep their temper during the quarantine. thus quarantine was very useful for our. what is more, many people have been leraning english with teleworking. last but not least it was very frofitable for our education. on the other hand it appears to be disadvantageous. firstly, it was very harm for industary, secondly, quarantine hidewered to our evolution
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IELTS essay Learning English during the pandemic period

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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