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the flowchart illustrating action of ermt

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The flowchart illustrates the information about the required course of action of the Emergency Response Management Team (ERMT) in case of any incident. Overall, the task response has been divided to take two paths (NO or YES). These two paths are further judged on responses and there are multiple ways of reacting to them on the basis of the level of destruction. Initially, the first action is to inform the ERMT that an incident has occurred. Once known of the fact team checks whether the incident is causing any imminent danger for employees or assets. If yes, the emergency response will be initiated and a response team will be put on standby by ERMT. Emergency actions like evacuation, shelter in place, first aid, and so on are carried on. If no, a response team will be put on standby. Further, a clear inspection is done on whether the event can be declared as a disaster or not. If yes, the announcement has disaster is done and the response teams are activated. Finally, these response teams carry out the recovery of the assets and are returned to normal steps. On the other hand, if it's no, everything is set back to normal operation.
The flowchart illustrates the information about the required course of action of the Emergency
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Response
Management
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Team
(
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ERMT
) in case of any incident.

Overall
, the task
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response
has
been divided
to take two paths (NO or YES). These two paths are
further
judged on
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responses
and there are multiple ways of reacting to them on the basis of the level of destruction.

Initially
, the
first
action is to inform the
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ERMT
that an incident has occurred. Once known of the fact
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team
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checks
whether the incident is causing any imminent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
for employees or assets. If yes, the emergency
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response
will
be initiated
and a
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response
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team
will
be put
on standby by
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ERMT
. Emergency actions like evacuation, shelter in place,
first
aid, and
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so
on
are carried
on. If no, a
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response
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team
will
be put
on standby.

Further
, a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
inspection
is done
on whether the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
can
be declared
as a disaster or not. If yes, the announcement has disaster
is done
and the
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response
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teams
are activated
.
Finally
, these
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response
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teams
carry out the recovery of the assets and
are returned
to normal steps.
On the other hand
, if it's no, everything
is set
back to normal operation.
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IELTS essay the flowchart illustrating action of ermt

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
202 words
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