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The given figure compares and contrasts data on the changes of electricity generation regarding to fuel origins in two countries namely Australia and France in 2 different time line of 1980 and 2000.

The given figure compares and contrasts data on the changes of electricity generation regarding to fuel origins in two countries namely Australia and France in 2 different time line of 1980 and 2000. Overall, it is obvious, the energy production with coal was the major source of energy in Australia in 1980 and 2000, however France used mostly equal amount of materials in 1980 but in 2000, nuclear power was the main source of fuel. In 1980, although natural gas and hydropower usage was adequate in amount of 20 percent, in 2000 natural gas and oil was approxomately omitted from electricity production circle. In Australia hydropower was second ranked in usage eith 36/170 on 2000. While reducting hydropower and natural gas consumption during 20 years, France increased nuclear power to 126 unit per 180 units. France consumed pretty low amount of coal for mentioned porpuse in comparison with Australia. In 1980 Australia used oil roughly half of France in 10%. While France had possibility to using nuclear power in the mentioned years, Australia couldn't consume this facility for electricity generation.

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 oil roughly half of France in 10%. While France had possibility to using nuclear power in the mentioned years, Australia couldn't consume this facility for electricity generation. 