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Visit Home town as a tourist

Visit Home town as a tourist 5kVBP
I have lots of things to say about my town. it is a very big town there have lots of places to visit. every month thousand people coming to see my town beauty it's a very beautiful place. there have a see Beach, park, beautiful villages etc. Writing Task 2 Art. censorship of art and artists; creativity · Business & Money. small vs large business · Communication & Personality. technology and communication · Crime &. .
I have lots of things to say about my town.
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it
is a
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very
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big
town there have lots of places to visit.
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every
month
Use "a thousand" or use a number before 'thousand'.
thousand
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people
coming to
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see
my town beauty it's a
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very
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beautiful
place.
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there
have a
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see
Beach, park,
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beautiful
villages etc. Writing Task 2

Art.
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censorship
of art and artists; creativity · Business & Money.
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small
vs large business · Communication & Personality.
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technology
and communication · Crime &.
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IELTS essay Visit Home town as a tourist

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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