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Mobile phones or smart phones are common in people’s daily lives. Using these devices is popular among students, and many of them use the phones in class while the lesson is in progress. Should students be allowed to use mobile (smart) phones in class? Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss your opinion. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words.

Mobile phones or smart phones are common in people’s daily lives. Using these devices is popular among students, and many of them use the phones in class while the lesson is in progress. Should students be allowed to use mobile (smart) phones in class? Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss your opinion. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. K3bV6
There is no denying that technology is changing the face of education. People have different views concerning on whether student should be permitted to use cell phone in class. From my perspective, I believe that this technology device has its own advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it is undeniable the positive benefits that mobile phones bring to students in the current information technology era. The first and foremost reason behind this is that, smartphones provide students supplementary learning materials and easy access to more information. In fact, the Internet is the place stored a giant amount of knowledge information, thus through smartphone students could read ebook, find references and follow whatever teachers said easier. Moreover, students can record the lectures and listen again at home simply by activating their mobile. Secondly, mobile is itself a good device for students to connect with their parents while they are at school or outside. To make this point further, for example, if students go to school and back home personally parents can be keep in touch their children and know their whereabouts. Specially, in some emergent case, when students need help immediately, they can be meet it easily just by making a call. On the other hand, I also think that using cellphones in class lead to negative effects on children. The first thing to mention, using this devices while the lecture is in progress cause distraction for student. For instance, instead of using cellphones for studying purpose, they do their own things such as playing games, chatting, surfing unrelevant website. In addition, Children are likely to become dishonest in the exam test. They use their phones to search for answers to quizzes, or better yet, to send their work around to friends. If this situation always occurs, it is not possible to properly assess the capacity of students. Last but not least, the technology devices give rise to negative effect on mental health. Exposure to high intensity cellphone can cause students to experience many health problems such as eyes strain, lack of sleep and so on. Specially, these conditions will be very dangerous if they go on for a long time. To conclude, using smart phones could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked.
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technology
is changing the face of education.
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have
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different
views concerning on whether
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student
should
be permitted
to
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use
cell
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phone
in
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class
. From my perspective, I believe that this
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technology
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device
has its
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own
advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand, it is undeniable the
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positive
benefits that mobile
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phones
bring to
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students
in the
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current
information
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technology
era. The
first
and foremost reason behind this is that, smartphones provide
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students
supplementary learning materials and easy access to more information. In fact, the Internet is the place stored a giant amount of knowledge information,
thus
through smartphone
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students
could read
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ebook
, find references and follow whatever teachers said easier.
Moreover
,
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students
can record the lectures and listen again at home
simply
by activating their mobile.
Secondly
, mobile is itself a
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good
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device
for
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students
to connect with their parents while they are at school or outside. To
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make
this point
further
,
for example
, if
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students
go to school and back home
personally
parents can be
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keep
in touch their children and know their whereabouts.
Specially
, in
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some
emergent case, when
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students
need
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help
immediately, they can be
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meet
it
easily
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just
by making a call.

On the other hand
, I
also
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think
that using cellphones in
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class
lead to
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negative
effects on children. The
first
thing to mention, using this
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devices
while the lecture is in progress cause distraction for
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student
.
For instance
,
instead
of using cellphones for studying purpose, they do their
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own
things such as playing games, chatting, surfing
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unrelevant
website.
In addition
, Children are likely to become dishonest in the exam
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test
. They
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use
their
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phones
to search for answers to quizzes, or better
yet
, to
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send
their
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work around
to friends. If this situation always occurs, it is not possible to
properly
assess the capacity of
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students
. Last
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but
not least, the
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technology
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devices
give rise to
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negative
effect on mental health. Exposure to high intensity cellphone can cause
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students
to experience
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many
health problems such as eyes strain, lack of sleep and
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so
on.
Specially
, these conditions will be
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very
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dangerous
if they go on for a long time.

To conclude
, using smart
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phones
could bring about certain benefits,
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but
its
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negative
consequences should not
be overlooked
.
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IELTS essay Mobile phones or smart phones are common in people’s daily lives. Using these devices is popular among students, and many of them use the phones in class while the lesson is in progress. Should students be allowed to use mobile (smart) phones in class? Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss your opinion. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.

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4 paragraphs
379 words
6.0
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