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The gap between the rich and poor is becoming wider, the rich richer, and the poor even poorer. what problems can the situation cause and give the solutions?

It has been observed that the gap between the upper class and the deprive class is incresing day by day. By this, richer person becomes more rich and poor person becoms more poor. There are many problems for such a situation; whereas, some visible solutions too. Both the problems and remedies would be discussed further. Out of all the problems, the biggest one is, the discrimination among the people would increase as the gap becomes wider. The rich people would not respect the other poor people. Due to this behaviour, in the time of emergency, people with good wealth would never help the poor people. Moreover, another problem is, overall literacy rate of the country would dafinitely affects by this situation. By this I mean, the school fees nowdays surging upto a very high level and it is next to impossible for the people with poverty to afford it for their wards. Some how economy of the country could also face downward trend. Focusing on the solutions, the most effective one is, governing body plays a vital role to reduce the discrimination rate by introducing some strict laws. Government should introduce some laws to protect the dignity of poor people. Furthermore, to improve the literacy rate of the nation government should build new government schools for children and also provide free treatment in hospitals to maintain the ration of healthy people. Governing bodies should also review their policies regarding the income tax sector and should update them to improve the economy of country. Thus, to wrap up the discussion, there are some probles occurs because of the gap between the rich people and the poor people. But, governing bodies plays an important role to overcome those all causes by giving some new policies and updating some excisting laws.
It has
been observed
that the gap between the upper
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class
and
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the deprive
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class
is
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incresing
day by day. By this, richer person becomes more rich and
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poor
person
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becoms
more
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poor
. There are
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many
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problems
for such a situation; whereas,
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some
visible solutions too. Both the
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problems
and remedies would
be discussed
further
.

Out of all the
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problems
, the biggest one is, the discrimination among the
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people
would increase as the gap becomes wider. The rich
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people
would not respect the other
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poor
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people
. Due to this
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behaviour
, in the time of emergency,
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people
with
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good
wealth would never
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help
the
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poor
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people
.
Moreover
, another
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problem
is,
overall
literacy rate of the country would
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dafinitely
affects by this situation. By this I mean, the school fees
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nowdays
surging
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upto
a
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very
high level and it is
next
to impossible for the
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people
with poverty to afford it for their wards.
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Some how
economy of the country could
also
face downward trend.

Focusing on the solutions, the most effective one is, governing body plays a vital role to
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reduce
the discrimination rate by introducing
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some
strict laws.
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Government
should introduce
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some
laws to protect the dignity of
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poor
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people
.
Furthermore
, to
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improve
the literacy rate of the nation
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government
should build new
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government
schools for children and
also
provide free treatment in hospitals to maintain the ration of healthy
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people
. Governing bodies should
also
review their policies regarding the income tax sector and should update them to
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improve
the economy of country.

Thus
, to wrap up the discussion, there are
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some
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probles
occurs
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because
of the gap between the rich
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people
and the
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poor
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people
.
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But
, governing bodies plays an
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important
role to overcome those all causes by giving
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some
new policies and updating
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some
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excisting
laws.

IELTS essay The gap between the rich and poor is becoming wider, the rich richer, and the poor even poorer. what problems can the situation cause and give the solutions?

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