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The function and fashion of eyeglasses

The function and fashion of eyeglasses mLaR1

The lecture represents that the first glasses made it for climate when the weather is dreadful and snowing. Consequently it is made from bone, animals or any such extradionary materials. However it hasn’t got lens. Therefore, no one certainly figured out who made the eyeglasses. Nevertheless some individuals comprehend that approximately the first eyeglasses were estimated to have been made in Italy.

The lecture represents that the first
 glasses made it for climate when the weather is dreadful and snowing. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 it is made
 from bone, animals or any such Possible spelling mistake found.extraordinary
extradionary
 materials. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 it hasn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 lens. Therefore
, no one certainly
 figured out who made the eyeglasses. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Nevertheless,
Nevertheless
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 individuals comprehend that approximately the first
 eyeglasses were estimated
 to have been made
 in Italy. 