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An email to Tyler about going shopping tomorrow

An email to Tyler about going shopping tomorrow PMaBB

From: jenna20309@gmail. com To: tylerjam2509@gmail. com Subject: About the shopping tomorrow with Tyler, my best friend How was your weekend? My weekend was normal, just go to school everyday, do homework. But tomorrow is Saturday so we are free! Tyler, in my opinion, I think that we will meet at the bus stop near my house. Is it convenient for you? I'm sorry because I'm a little bit busy so I can meet you at 8 am. I'm sorry! Well, next week is your Birthday so I want to buy you a present! However, I want to buy lots of thing too! For example, new shoes, new books and more! What do you want to buy? Tell me! What do you like for your present? Tell me, too! Best wishes!

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Subject: About the shopping tomorrow with Tyler, my best friend

How was your weekend? My weekend was normal, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 go to school 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
, do homework. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 tomorrow is Saturday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we are free! Tyler, in my opinion, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 at the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 near my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Is it convenient for you? I'm sorry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I'm a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 busy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you at 8 am. I'm sorry! Well, next
 week is your Birthday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 you a present! However
, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: "lots of things".lots of things
lots of thing
 too! For example
, new shoes, new books and more! What do you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
? This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
Tell
 me! What do you like for your present? This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
Tell
 me, too! Best wishes! 