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If food tastes good, it’s probably bad for you.

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Most people believe that whether their food is delicious, it’s obviously not very good for them. Mostly, I agree with this statement, because it may be true considering what ingredients our meal consists of. Firstly, we tend to take great delight in eating yummy food despite the fact it is unhealthy. The reason for this is that our brain falls under the sway of food’s flavor. In my view modern food, especially the processed one, contains a myriad of artificial flavors. The more we eat such snack the more frequently we want to eat it again. Secondly, unhealthy food commonly appears in every corner. That is the reason why people are made to buy it in increasing frequency. On the other hand, I believe that nutrient-enriched food isn’t necessarily to be unappetizing. It entirely depends on what ingredients there are or how they were cooked. Moreover, it’s about timing. In my opinion, truly beneficial for humans food has peculiar flavor and we need to get used to eating it. But then we see that there is nothing more delicious than this food. To sum up, delicious food doesn’t need to be harmful. You just should watch what you eat by reading carefully the content of the food you buy in the grocery stores or get used to eating not very tasty meal at first sight, due to the fact most of the time the less delicious the food is, the most safe it is.
Most
people
believe that whether their
food
is
delicious
, it’s
obviously
not
very
good
for them.
Mostly
, I
agree
with this statement,
because
it may be true considering what ingredients our meal consists of.

Firstly
, we tend to take great delight in eating yummy
food
despite the fact it is unhealthy.
The reason for this is
that our brain falls under the sway of
food’s
flavor. In my view modern
food
,
especially
the processed one, contains a myriad of artificial flavors. The more we eat such snack the more
frequently
we want to eat it again.
Secondly
, unhealthy
food
commonly
appears in every corner.
That is
the reason why
people
are made
to
buy
it in increasing frequency.

On the other hand
, I believe that nutrient-enriched
food
isn’t
necessarily
to be unappetizing. It
entirely
depends on what ingredients there are or how they
were cooked
.
Moreover
, it’s about timing. In my opinion,
truly
beneficial for humans
food
has peculiar
flavor and
we need to
get
used
to eating it.
But
then we
see
that there is nothing more
delicious
than this food.

To sum up,
delicious
food
doesn’t need to be harmful. You
just
should
watch
what you eat by reading
carefully
the content of the
food
you
buy
in the grocery stores or
get
used
to eating not
very
tasty meal at
first
sight, due to the fact most of the time the less
delicious
the
food
is,
the most safe
it is.
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IELTS essay If food tastes good, it’s probably bad for you.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
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