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The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue v.1

The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue v. 1
Globalization of trade has been a controversial topic for a long time. Although some people believe that it is essential for growth and development, others argue that it has an adverse effect on local industries. In my opinion, the flow of goods across countries is crucial for economic development. On the one hand, globalization is considered as a necessity for the growth of world economy. Firstly, it promotes rapid development of goods with better quality. Different countries excel in the production of different goods and because of globalization they are able to share the finished products with the rest of the world. Secondly, it helps in producing cheaper goods. Market size has changed from local size to international size which helps manufacturers to produce goods in huge quantity and hence at cheaper prices / rates. Additionally, it makes resources available across the planet. For example, countries like Saudi Arabia import all the food products from other countries as their land is unfit to support the vegetation and export crude oil to other countries. On the other hand, people are against international brands because it creates a lot of competition for small brands operating in a limited area. For example, with the arrival of international shoe sellers, local manufacturers are facing trouble in selling their products. Additionally, international brands are much cheaper than local brands. Consequently, local shopkeepers struggle hard to sell their products against their cheaper counterparts. This may also lead to poor economy growth for countries that import much more than they export. In conclusion, while globalization may have a negative impact on local businessmen, it is necessary as it promotes the development of technology and world economy.
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some
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people
believe that it is essential for growth and development, others argue that it has an adverse effect on
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local
industries. In my opinion, the flow of
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goods
across
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countries
is crucial for economic development.

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is considered
as a necessity for the growth of world economy.
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, it promotes rapid development of
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goods
with better quality.
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countries
excel in the production of
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different
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goods
and
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because
of globalization they are able to share the finished
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products
with the rest of the world.
Secondly
, it
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helps
in producing
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cheaper
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goods
. Market size has
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changed
from
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local
size to
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international
size which
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helps
manufacturers to produce
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goods
in huge quantity and
hence
at
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cheaper
prices / rates.
Additionally
, it
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makes
resources available across the planet.
For example
,
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countries
like Saudi Arabia import all the food
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products
from
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other
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countries
as their land is unfit to support the vegetation and export crude oil to
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other
countries.

On the
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other
hand,
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people
are against
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international
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brands
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because
it creates
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a lot of
competition for
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small
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brands
operating in a limited area.
For example
, with the arrival of
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international
shoe sellers,
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local
manufacturers are facing trouble in selling their
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products
.
Additionally
,
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international
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brands
are much
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cheaper
than
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local
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brands
.
Consequently
,
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local
shopkeepers struggle
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hard
to sell their
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products
against their
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cheaper
counterparts. This may
also
lead to poor economy growth for
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countries
that import much more than they export.

In conclusion
, while globalization may have a
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negative
impact on
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local
businessmen, it is necessary as it promotes the development of technology and world economy.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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