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The following diagrams show how are pellet stove and a pellet boiler works to heat the house Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons when relevant v.1

The following diagrams show how are pellet stove and a pellet boiler works to heat the house
Studying patterns have been changing rapidly due to the evolution of the education system in the current world. Ample amount of countries believe that children’s should do their assessments during their free time apart from regular study hours while some nation’s condemn it by saying that this free time must be used for engaging infant’s in outdoor activities. This essay will completely agree, why it is essential to study even in non-regular hours and I addition it also provides suitable examples to support this statement. The first major reason for encouraging this practice is because of the current education structure. During the class hours children’s are only taught concepts, but they aren’t practiced and moreover this phenomenon makes them hard to memorize things that they have been preached earlier and studying after class helps them to recollect things easily. For example, From my personal experience if I don’t study after my school, I forget the concepts and in the end I used to struggle getting good grades. Hence, Doing homework helps to be updated with the course work. The second major reason is related to success factor. In order to excel in the course, one must put more efforts and time on it apart from the normal hours. Doing homework helps students to devote more time on the subject and help them to reach greater heights. For instance, Elon musk used to study more about physics after class and now he is enjoying the fruit of all the efforts that he had put earlier. Hence, over time studying will help one to succeed in life. Although, involving in physical activities is important, but devoting more time to studies outweigh the benefits derived from outdoor activities. To conclude, infants doing homework after class helps them to recollect what they learn in class and moreover it also help’s them to succeed in life. Hence, this essay has successfully discussed about the importance of doing homework and also supported this statement with real life examples.
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hours
children’s are
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taught concepts,
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them
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hard
to memorize things that they have
been preached
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class
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helps
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, From my personal experience if I don’t
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helps
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be updated
with the course work.

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is related
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must
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.
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helps
students to devote more
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more about physics after
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class
and
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now
he is enjoying the fruit of all the efforts that he had put earlier.
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, over
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time
studying will
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help
one to succeed in life.

Although, involving in physical activities is
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important
,
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devoting more
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time
to
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outweigh the benefits derived from outdoor activities.
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, infants
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homework
after
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helps
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and
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13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay The following diagrams show how are pellet stove and a pellet boiler works to heat the house

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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