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Books are the best companion one can ever have

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Books are the finest companions we can have since they expand our knowledge, make us joyful, and make us intelligent. People who read books regularly are shown to be more informed than those who do not read books at all. As a result, make books your life’s finest buddy. A man’s best buddy is unquestionably books. A person’s relationship with a book develops throughout his most formative years. A child’s relationship with the book begins as soon as he or she begins to Get education. Around 130 million books have been published in the history of humanity; a heavy reader will at best get through 6, 000 in a lifetime. Most of them won’t be much fun or very memorable. Books are like people; we meet many but fall in love very seldom. Perhaps only thirty books will ever truly mark us. They will be different for each of us, but the way in which they affect us will be similar. In 1450, the first printing press published book was developed by Johannes Gutenberg in Germany, and this incident set a different mark in the history of humankind’s development. From then to now, there have been several developments in the type of books. We can see a variety of book formats like hardback, paperback, mass market paperback, eBooks, and audiobooks. All in all, whatever kind of books we choose to read based on our individual preferences should be for gaining good knowledge, which will make our life easier and will never harm others in any way. We can read all types of books and apply the knowledge acquired when we need it.
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are the finest companions we can have since they expand our knowledge,
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make
us joyful, and
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make
us intelligent.
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who
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read
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books
regularly
are shown
to be more informed than those who do not
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read
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books
at all.
As a result
,
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make
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books
your life’s finest buddy. A
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man
’s best buddy is
unquestionably
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books
. A person’s relationship with a
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develops throughout his most formative years.
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as he or she
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education.

Around 130 million
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have
been published
in the history of humanity; a heavy reader will at best
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get
through 6, 000 in a lifetime. Most of them won’t be much fun or
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very
memorable.
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are like
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meet
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fall in
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very
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thirty
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will ever
truly
mark us. They will be
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different
for each of us,
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the way in which they affect us will be similar.

In 1450, the
first
printing press published
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book
was developed
by Johannes Gutenberg in Germany, and this incident set a
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different
mark in the history of humankind’s development. From then to
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now
, there have been several developments in the type of
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books
. We can
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see
a variety of
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book
formats like hardback, paperback, mass market paperback,
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eBooks
, and audiobooks.

All in all, whatever kind of
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books
we choose to
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read
based on our individual preferences should be for gaining
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good
knowledge, which will
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make
our life easier and will never harm others in any way. We can
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read
all types of
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books
and apply the knowledge acquired when we need it.
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IELTS essay Books are the best companion one can ever have

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
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