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What are the benefits of having free time? Are there any differences between how we spend our free time now and how we spent it previously

What are the benefits of having free time? Are there any differences between how we spend our free time now and how we spent it previously OMbW3
In today's modern life; sometimes, you have free time, you get relaxed and idle, for some people it’s so boring but for others, this is an award and an occasion to do anything that you like if u know how to make the most of free time. for example, you can develop new skills, build relationships, make money online, plan for the future and also take care of your physical and mental health. Modern life was overloaded with work or study which make me have very little free time so don’t try hard work or slave at something because that may frustrate the pleasure of free time. Today's life is really very different from the past but i think there is no change in the way people use leisure time. We still spend this time to relax and do the things we love
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IELTS essay What are the benefits of having free time? Are there any differences between how we spend our free time now and how we spent it previously

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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