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The flowchart has been illustrated the steps that the consequence of deforestatio

The flowchart has been illustrated the steps that the consequence of deforestatio Q5rgy
In begin, clear-cutting of forests was the main node of deforestation. People were cut the trees in the forest and then there were faced four kinds of major natural disaster, which is heavy logging equipment compresses the soil, fewer roots hold the top soil, increases risk of burning and plants return less moisture to the air. If workers are used heavy logging equipment for compresses the soil, then the soil becomes hard and baked. Accordingly, rainwater runs off, and, as a major result, people are faced to flooding. Next, fewer roots hold the topsoil, and then the topsoil will be eroded. After that, pioneer species move in and then vegetation is degraded. As a result less biodiversity will be made in the nature. Next, the increased risk of burning has wasted the wood. Accordingly, micro-organisms feeding on waste lost and, again, pioneer species move in, and vegetation is degraded. Then same result which less biodiversity will be grenarated. Another major thing is less moisture to air. After this will be happen, less precipitation is happen and then drought has been increased. Again the same path which is pioneer species move in and vegetation is degraded, and less biodiversity will be made.
In
begin
,
clear
-cutting of forests was the main node of deforestation.
People
were
cut
the trees in the forest and then there
were faced
four kinds of major natural disaster, which is heavy logging equipment compresses the
soil
, fewer roots hold the top
soil
, increases
risk
of burning and plants return
less
moisture to the air. If workers are
used
heavy logging equipment for compresses the
soil
, then the
soil
becomes
hard
and baked.
Accordingly
, rainwater runs off, and, as a major result,
people
are faced
to flooding.

Next
, fewer roots hold the topsoil, and then the topsoil will
be eroded
. After that, pioneer species
move
in and then vegetation
is degraded
.
As a result
less
biodiversity will
be made
in the nature.
Next
, the increased
risk
of burning has wasted the wood.
Accordingly
, micro-organisms feeding on waste lost and, again, pioneer species
move
in, and vegetation
is degraded
. Then same result which
less
biodiversity will be
grenarated
.

Another major thing is
less
moisture to air. After this will be
happen
,
less
precipitation is
happen
and then drought has
been increased
. Again the same path which is pioneer species
move
in and vegetation
is degraded
, and
less
biodiversity will
be made
.
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IELTS essay The flowchart has been illustrated the steps that the consequence of deforestatio

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