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The first picture shows the layout of an airport, and the second airport shows some proposed change to the airport space.

The first picture shows the layout of an airport, and the second airport shows some proposed change to the airport space. 9lGmr

The first picture shows the layout of an airport, and the second airport shows some proposed change to the airport space. It is clear that significant changes will be made in terms of the use of floor space in the gallery, while some newly-built facilities will be ornamented the airport. The boarding area in the redeveloped gallery will be about triple as large as it is now, increasing the number of gates from 8 to 18. In place of the walkway, which runs through the boarding area now, the redevelopment plan shows a sky train. Besides, a new shop is expected to locate next to the security checkpoint. At present, inside the departures lounge, a café and check-in counters lie in the either side. However, the plan is to move them to the other side respectively. It can also be seen that there will be a bag drop area close to the café. Meanwhile, new facilities like café, ATM machines will occupy the arrivals lounge. The space shown on the proposed plan for car hire is not currently part of the airport, Words count: 182

The first
 picture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the layout of an airport, and the second airport This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 proposed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 to the airport space.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 will be made
 in terms of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of floor space in the gallery, while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
newly
-built facilities will be ornamented
 the airport.

The boarding area in the redeveloped gallery will be about triple as large as it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, increasing the number of gates from 8 to 18. In place of the walkway, which runs through the boarding area This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, the redevelopment plan This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 a sky train. Besides
, a new shop is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to locate next
 to the security checkpoint.

At present, inside the departures lounge, a café and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in counters lie in the either side. However
, the plan is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 them to the other side respectively
. It can also
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there will be a bag drop area close to the café. Meanwhile, new facilities like café, This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply "ATMs".ATMs
ATM machines
 will occupy the arrivals lounge. The space shown on the proposed plan for car hire is not currently
 part of the airport,

Words count: 182