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Describe an interesting city you know and like Where is it? How did you go there? What did you do there? Explain why you found it so interesting.

Describe an interesting city you know and like Where is it? How did you go there? What did you do there? Explain why you found it so interesting. Oyn1j
The most interesting city for me is Nha Trang city where my family went 3 years ago. This place was so fascinating memories on the bus to travel on the road. The white sand and the sunshines down on the coconut canopyand the bright sunshines make me can’t forget enjoyable feeling at that time. On the contrary, when we arrived at a center city, we overwhelmed the beauty of peaceful, and animated as well. By the way, my family was going to supermarket was famous and a lot of foreigner tourism went there. We bought many foods which is fresh and tasty. After that, my parents took me to Nha Trang beach-one of the most beautiful beaches in the world. In addition, we took some more lovely photos. Besides that, the mark that no one does not know is a place which is only wonderful which the people also were very hospitable. The important thing I love Nha Trang much is about hearty and not annoyed like Ho Chi Minh city and the other cities.
The most interesting city for me is
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Nha
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Trang
city where my family went 3 years ago. This place was
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so
fascinating memories on the bus to travel on the road. The white sand and the
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sunshines
down on the coconut
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canopyand
the bright
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sunshines
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make
me can’t forget enjoyable feeling at that time.
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, when we arrived at a center city, we overwhelmed the beauty of peaceful, and animated
as well
.

By the way, my family was going to supermarket was
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famous
and
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a lot of
foreigner tourism went there. We
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bought
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many
foods which is fresh and tasty. After that, my parents took me to
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Nha
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Trang
beach-one of the most
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beautiful
beaches in the world.
In addition
, we took
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some
more lovely photos.
Besides
that, the mark that no one does not know is a place which is
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only
wonderful which the
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people
also
were
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very
hospitable. The
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important
thing I
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love
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Nha
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Trang
much is about hearty and not annoyed like
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Ho Chi Minh city
and the other
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cities
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IELTS essay Describe an interesting city you know and like Where is it? How did you go there? What did you do there? Explain why you found it so interesting.

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