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The first day of university

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I wake up at 5 AM O'clock. I spend half hour to prepare for my first day in university. My mom called me to eat my breakfast. It was so nice morning. When I am laughing with my family, the driver arrived. I said goodbye to my family, and run to ride the car. My college is half an hour away from my home. When I arrived, I found more than one person at the entrance door to receive the students. One of them was so angry, and I don’t why. She hugged me and raised her voice, because my clothes don’t fit the place. I started to explain for her why I am wearing these clothes. She don’t understand me. I started to promising her that from tomorrow I will wearing the uniform. Which is a scrub, because I am a medical student. She said okay and left me. I run faster to my class, because my class was started before 15 minutes. When I arrived, the students full a class and there’s no teacher. We was waiting for her. But someone said that most of teachers don’t attend the first week of university. I think that’s a rule.

I wake up at 5 AM O'clock. I spend half hour to prepare for my first
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so
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so
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because
 my clothes don’t fit the place. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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explain
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don’t
 understand me. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to promising her that from tomorrow I will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "wear"wear
wearing
 the uniform. Which is a scrub, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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left
 me. I run faster to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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because
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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started
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 15 minutes. When I arrived, the students full a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and there’s no teacher. We Use first person plural verb with 'we': "are", "were".arewere
was
 waiting for her. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 someone said that After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the teachers") or simply say "most teachers".most of the teachersmost teachers
most of teachers
 don’t attend the first
 week of university. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that’s a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
. 