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Everyone one of us should become a vegetarian because eating a meet can cause a serious helthe problem

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been observed
that numbers of human avoid
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eating
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and become a vegetarian
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because
of conception of
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meat
can you bring the serious health difficulties. I
firmly
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agree
with this
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given
statement my argument has been elaborate in upcoming paragraphs with logical example.

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numbers of argument by individuals should become a vegetarian
first
and foremost one is to support my stance is that consumption of
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meat
brings
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bringsNumerous
health problem to elaborate few animals
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meet
is a perilous for
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eating
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because
of in these days number
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so
far is available in animal body
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so
that if
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people
are
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eating
this animal
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they will
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suffering
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many health
problem

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addition
human both
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choose a Choose a
vegetarian
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items
or avoiding
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cut
jobs and meets
therefore
they become a
fully
fit as a fiddle
in other words
visited vegetarians items give us a several new teachers in vitamins
instead
of the
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meat
and vegetables plays crucial role in mankind life. Vegetarian who is
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so
afraid
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many
disease Thursday cannot always select a busy Aryan disease
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in spite of
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meat


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However
I would not overlook other aspect to
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eating
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meat
give
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some
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nutrition's
cannot provide a vegetable
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dises
when
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meet
his gives us it any mall kills to
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some
species will spearhead
moreover
meets are useful for making the few drugs

To conclude
in off for my opinion both are paramount for human not
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only
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Meet
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but
also
which
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sometimes
Vegetarians are most crucial
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in spite of
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meat
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IELTS essay Everyone one of us should become a vegetarian because eating a meet can cause a serious helthe problem

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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