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Everyone one of us should become a vegetarian because eating a meet can cause a serious helthe problem

Everyone one of us should become a vegetarian because eating a meet can cause a serious helthe problem 3bJbJ

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eating
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meat
 and become a vegetarian This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of conception of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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given
 statement my argument has been elaborate in upcoming paragraphs with logical example.

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 and foremost one is to support my stance is that consumption of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat
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bringsNumerous
 health problem to elaborate few animals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 is a perilous for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconsumptiondiningchewing
eating
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of in these days number This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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so
 that if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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eating
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meat
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suffering
Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much health", "a good deal of health".much healtha good deal of health
many health
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addition
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choose a Choose a
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items
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cut
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 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat
 and vegetables plays crucial role in mankind life. Vegetarian who is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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many
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in spite of
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meat


Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I would not overlook other aspect to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconsumptiondiningchewing
eating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat
 give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Incorrect plural form; it does not need any apostrophe. Did you mean "nutritions"?nutritions
nutrition's
 cannot provide a vegetable Possible spelling mistake found.diesdiscsdishesrisesdisksdoses
dises
 when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 his gives us it any mall kills to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 species will spearhead moreover
 meets are useful for making the few drugs

To conclude
 in off for my opinion both are paramount for human not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
Meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 Vegetarians are most crucial This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat