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embarrassing moment I have ever experienced

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In my school life, I will never forget the moment when everyone already knew I have trouble with my speech. The story happened when I study grade 8. On Friday, a teacher assigned me to present the class in front of the whole school on the next flag salute day. I was so excited and believed that I could do it well. On that day, I worried about a speech so I spoke not fluently. After that, I noticed some of my friends were laughing at me and I was very ashamed of that. I practiced a lot at home and I imagined doing it successfully and getting applause. Finally just made a joke. It is difficult to describe in words what I felt at that moment. But it was the most embarrassing moment I have ever experienced.
In my school life, I will never forget the moment when everyone already knew I have trouble with my speech. The story happened when I study grade 8. On Friday, a teacher assigned me to present the
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in front of the whole school on the
next
flag salute day. I was
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so
excited and believed that I could do it well. On that day, I worried about a speech
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so
I spoke not
fluently
. After that, I noticed
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some
of my friends were laughing at
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me and
I was
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very
ashamed of that. I practiced a lot at home and I imagined doing it
successfully
and getting applause.
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Finally
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just
made a joke. It is difficult to
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describe
in words what I felt at that moment.
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it was the most embarrassing moment I have ever experienced.

IELTS essay embarrassing moment I have ever experienced

Essay
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1 paragraphs
138 words
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