Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. 90Lj
Technology is flourishing by leap and bounds in each and every field and transports is not exceptional. Now day's everyone want there own car or vehicle for there convince. In my point of view, there are lots of positive points but also have negative impact for society, environment and health. To embark on, with regards to positive impact of cars, that makes life easier and less wasting time for going somewhere. At present, hardly people use trains and buses for traveling as they are taking more time, however we can say there are not able to find private space as well. Whenever have plans for outing with family or friends, our first preference is our own vehicle as we find lots of private space and can stop anywhere in between traveling time. Secondly, people don't want to stand in long queues for buying tickets or waiting for buses, So they prefer having own car to avoid waste of time. On the other hand, certain drawbacks cannot be ignored like traffic, pollution and behavior. For example, with use of car that will increase traffic which create lots of noise pollution's as well, directly impact on environment. Cars are also destroying natural resources like oil, air pollution. To avoid this, government had take lots of actions like road tax, to avoid tax people reduce the use of cars. To sum up, cars can be avoid if there have other resource available. There should be more rules so everyone less use cars for control the traffic and pollution.
Technology is flourishing by leap and bounds in each and every field and transports is not exceptional.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
day's everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
or vehicle for there convince. In my point of view, there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lots
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
points
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact for society, environment and health. To embark on,
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
impact of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
, that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
life easier and less wasting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for going somewhere. At present, hardly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
trains and buses for traveling as they are taking more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
,
however
we can say there are not able to find private space
as well
. Whenever have plans for outing with family or friends, our
first
preference is our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
vehicle as we find
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lots
of private space and can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
anywhere in between traveling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
Secondly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
don't want to stand in long queues for buying tickets or waiting for buses,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
they prefer having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
avoid
waste of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
On the other hand
, certain drawbacks cannot be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignored
like traffic, pollution and behavior.
For example
, with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
that will increase traffic which create
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lots
of noise pollution's
as well
,
directly
impact on environment.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Cars
are
also
destroying natural resources like oil, air pollution. To
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
avoid
this,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
had
Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "taken".
take
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lots
of actions like road tax, to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
avoid
tax
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
. To sum up,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
can be
Consider using the past participle "avoided"?
avoid
if there have other resource available. There should be more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
everyone less
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
for control the traffic and pollution.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts