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The figures presents the dry method which coffee factories sometimes employed.

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The figures presents the dry method which coffee factories sometimes employed. As a general trend, there are 12 main stages, such as arranging the beans, cleaning, preserving the quality and element including the coffee and even though packing the coffee. Looking at the presentation in more accurately, the beans of coffee must first be gathered manually, after this process beans must be cleaned through the separator. Next, the bobs are dried in the sun throughout 4 weeks and they are raked and turned by the farmer, until the beans are sent to mill they are stored in silo. The middle stage of figure is 7th step, more detail the process hulling the beans into the powder and granding. Each process done by individuals, this powder is started the bagging mode, which preserve all aroma and taste of coffee, then they are supplied on the market for spreading. However, the roasting is done in coffee shops and are packed, so they are ready to be sold
The figures
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presents
the dry method which
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coffee
factories
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sometimes
employed.

As a general trend, there are 12 main stages, such as arranging the
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beans
, cleaning, preserving the quality and element including the
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coffee
and
even though
packing the coffee.

Looking at the presentation in more
accurately
, the
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beans
of
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coffee
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must
first
be gathered
manually
, after this process
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beans
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must
be cleaned
through the separator.
Next
, the bobs
are dried
in the sun throughout 4
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weeks and
they
are raked
and turned by the farmer, until the
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beans
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to mill they
are stored
in silo.

The middle stage of figure is 7th step, more detail the process hulling the
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beans
into the powder and
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granding
. Each process done by individuals, this powder is
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started
the bagging mode, which preserve all aroma and taste of
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coffee
, then they
are supplied
on the market for spreading.
However
, the roasting
is done
in
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coffee
shops and
are packed
,
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so
they are ready to
be sold
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IELTS essay The figures presents the dry method which coffee factories sometimes employed.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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