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The Felix stone has changed a lot between 1967 and 2001. Do you agree with this statement?

The Felix stone has changed a lot between 1967 and 2001. E3q9B

The given picture illustrates the difference of Felix stone between 1967 and 2001. Overall, there was a lot of changing in that years. Some building had been rebuilt or replaced. Some facilities had added to this area. In 1967, in the North of this area, from East to West, there was a farmland, two shops, highstreet between two shops, a golf course. In the South, from East to West, there was a fish market, marina and pier leading straight to the sea in the south, a café and a hotel. These also had some facilities like trees and dunes. In 2001, farmland was replaced for a new hotel. That hotel had a swimming pool and two tennis courts. Two shops were combined to bigger one. The shop next to farmland was replaced for an apartments the land, which had fish market, was rebuilt to private beach. The marina and pier was demolished to create a public beach. The hotel in the southwest was rebuilt and add a car park. Trees were planted more in that direction. The dunes was reduced to build wind turbines

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 picture illustrates the difference of Felix stone between 1967 and 2001.

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a lot of
 changing in that years. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 building had been rebuilt or replaced. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 facilities had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to this area.

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shops
, Possible spelling mistake found.high street
highstreet
 between two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
, a golf course. In the South, from East to West, there was a fish market, marina and pier leading straight to the sea in the south, a café and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
. These also
 had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facilities like trees and dunes. In 2001, farmland was replaced
 for a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
. That You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 had a swimming pool and two tennis courts. Two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
were combined
 to bigger one. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
next
 to farmland was replaced
 for Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "an apartment" or simply "apartments"?an apartmentapartments
an apartments
 the land, which had fish market, was rebuilt to private beach. The marina and pier was demolished
 to create a public beach. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 in the southwest was rebuilt and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 a car park. Trees were planted
 more in that direction. The dunes You should probably use: "were".were
was
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reduced
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turbines