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In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting?

In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting? oR51w
Voting is a process in which the leader of a nation is selected through a votes by the citizens. Although some countries insist on mandatory voting, other nations disagree with this notion. This essay will argue that compulsory voting is necessary because it is the basic right of an individual and it is essential to develop a country with good leaders. Citizens can choose the best leaders through election to rule and guide the nation to a prosperous future. Every individual in a country has the responsibility to safeguard the wellbeing of their homeland by making decisions in elections. In vast countries like India where voting is not mandatory, there is a large percentage of people who refuse to poll their votes making the administration of the country worse. Compulsory voting has clear advantages both for the country and citizens. A mandatory voting system elevate the responsibilities of leader. By this I mean, the leaders will have the awareness that the individuals will vote against them if they fail to develop the nation. It is a weapon for public to make changes in the world which has to be used in a useful way. To recapitulate, compulsory voting has clear advantages because it can improve then development of the nation and citizens.
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Voting
is a process in which the
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leader
of a
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nation
is selected
through a votes by the citizens. Although
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some
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countries
insist on mandatory
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voting
, other
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nations
disagree with this notion. This essay will argue that compulsory
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voting
is necessary
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because
it is the basic right of an individual and it is essential to develop a
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country
with
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good
leaders.

Citizens can choose the best
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leaders
through election to
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rule
and guide the
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nation
to a prosperous future. Every individual in a
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country
has the responsibility to safeguard the
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wellbeing
of their homeland by making decisions in elections. In vast
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countries
like India where
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voting
is not mandatory, there is a large percentage of
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people
who refuse to poll their votes making the administration of the
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country
worse. Compulsory
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voting
has
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clear
advantages both for the
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country
and citizens.

A mandatory
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voting
system elevate the responsibilities of
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leader
. By this I mean, the
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leaders
will have the awareness that the individuals will vote against them if they fail to develop the
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nation
. It is a weapon for public to
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make
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changes
in the world which
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has to
be
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used
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in a useful way
.

To recapitulate, compulsory
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voting
has
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clear
advantages
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because
it can
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improve
then development of the
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nation
and citizens.
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IELTS essay In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
212 words
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