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The favourite part and learnt lesson in :’’ The adventure of Huckleberry Finn’’

The favourite part and learnt lesson in: ’’ The adventure of Huckleberry Finn’’ joj1L
I am a bookworm of adventurous novels, especially fiction relating to civilization journeys to extricate from (the storm of life) the struggle. In ‘’ The adventure of Huckleberry Finn’’, the way Huck fakes his death puts an impression on me and I have learned a lot from this so it is my best-loved part. Huck fakes his death because of being violated by his alcoholic abusive father and his aspirations of freeing from such human constraints. It is astonishing whenever I think of his elaborate plan; in detail, he kills the wild boar and uses the blood to make a slaughter deception. Moreover, although the cop and his father investigate his death, they find nothing and confirm that Huck was dead. Huck is successful and has an adventure to the Western with his Jim - a black run-away slave. Though Huck’s plan to extricate himself from struggle, I really admired him; additionally, I realized that what is important in one’s life is not rich or disengaged, it is freedom.
I am a bookworm of adventurous novels,
especially
fiction relating to civilization journeys to extricate from (the storm of life) the struggle. In ‘’ The adventure of Huckleberry Finn’’, the way Huck fakes his death puts an impression on me and I have learned a lot from this
so
it is my best-
loved
part. Huck fakes his death
because
of
being violated
by his alcoholic abusive father and his aspirations of freeing from such human constraints. It is astonishing whenever I
think
of his elaborate plan; in detail, he kills the wild boar and
uses
the blood to
make
a slaughter deception.
Moreover
, although the cop and his father investigate his death, they find nothing and confirm that Huck was dead. Huck is successful and has an adventure to the Western with his Jim
-
a black run-away slave. Though Huck’s plan to extricate himself from struggle, I
really
admired him;
additionally
, I realized that what is
important
in one’s life is not rich or disengaged, it is freedom.
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IELTS essay The favourite part and learnt lesson in: ’’ The adventure of Huckleberry Finn’’

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