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The fast food and what is good about it and what is bad about

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Fast food is the most popular food in the world because it’s delicious and it quickly to make but there a bad things and good things about fast food, the bad things that is the fast food is really unhealthy food and it’s bad for children because the fast food will destroy the health and it’s a really bad thing, and the most of times the fast food comes to you with a bad quality and full oil and maybe old food, bad the good points is that the fast food taste is really good and it comes to you really fast and that is my favorite point.
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IELTS essay The fast food and what is good about it and what is bad about

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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