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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important Global priority today to what extent do you agree or disagree

The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important Global priority today 2e5J
There in notion that the evaluation of safe alternatives to fossil fuels is the most significant and need of the hour for the Global although it crualy important 212 safer substitute to the exacting source of energy it is not the most crupil activity to do as there are others. Firstly instead of developing safe option for energy recruitment controlling the population explosion which has become a hard nut to crack for government around the word is more important obviously it becomes our priority to mitigate the executing population rate as it generates numerous troubled regarding not only the environment in term of exploration of natural resources but also several other like a food security pay security and so on.
There in notion that the evaluation of safe alternatives to fossil fuels is the most significant and need of the hour for the Global although it
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activity to do as there are others.

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of developing safe option for energy recruitment controlling the population explosion which has become a
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hard
nut to crack for
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government
around the word is more
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obviously
it becomes our priority to mitigate the executing population rate as it generates numerous troubled regarding not
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only
the environment in term of exploration of natural resources
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several other like a food security pay security and
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IELTS essay The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important Global priority today

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2 paragraphs
120 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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