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Students in schools and universities learn more from their teachers than through other means such as the Internet, libraries, and TV. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Students in schools and universities learn more from their teachers than through other means such as the Internet, libraries, and TV. JxlE
Schools and university's are considered to be a temple of learning and teachers are considered as hierarchy of education, learning, moreover people believe that students learn more from school that other means of information-gathering such as internet, libraries, this essay will explain why teachers are more imported than any other means of information-gathering. On the one hand, It's undeniable that teachers play a vital roll in educating the youth firstly classrooms tend to engage the young minds better than compared to self studying secondly discussion encourages the students to interact more resulting in understanding the subject better, consequently brings about personal interest in the subject, further more teachers can give special attention to individual students who require more attention in a particular subject that they are lagging behind this individual effort is important to goven the young minds to the life ahed. On the other, contemporary society is starting to depend more and more on the Internet as it is easily accessible and effortless to brows through with just one key word, the problem arises with the content u get, as it can be misleading, unverified therefore false information does more harm than good, whereas libraries are considered to be one of the most imported source of knowledge however the effort to study requires motivation which only a good teacher can bring about in a student therefor teachers both educate and motivate youth to learn more from whatever means possible. In conclusion, there is no doubt that other means of learning are the standard in modern society however the motivation to learn is fueled by the teacher.
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teachers
are considered
as hierarchy of education, learning,
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people
believe that
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students
learn more from school that
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other
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means
of information-gathering such as internet, libraries, this essay will
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explain
why
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teachers
are more imported than any
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other
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means
of information-gathering.

On the one hand, It's undeniable that
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teachers
play a vital roll in educating the youth
firstly
classrooms tend to engage the young minds better than compared to self studying
secondly
discussion encourages the
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students
to interact more resulting in understanding the subject better,
consequently
brings about personal interest in the subject,
further
more
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teachers
can give special attention to individual
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students
who require more attention in a particular subject that they are lagging behind this individual effort is
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important
to
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goven
the young minds to the life
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ahed
.

On the
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other
, contemporary society is starting to depend more and more on the Internet as it is
easily
accessible and effortless to brows through with
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just
one key word, the problem arises with the content u
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get
, as it can be misleading, unverified
therefore
false information does more harm than
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good
, whereas libraries
are considered
to be one of the most imported source of knowledge
however
the effort to study requires motivation which
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only
a
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good
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teacher
can bring about in a
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student
therefor
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teachers
both educate and motivate youth to learn more from whatever
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means
possible.

In conclusion
, there is no doubt that
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other
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means
of learning are the standard in modern society
however
the motivation to learn
is fueled
by the
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teacher
.
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IELTS essay Students in schools and universities learn more from their teachers than through other means such as the Internet, libraries, and TV.

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