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the evolution of cars, and I will emphasize on the ownership and use of cars in British, as well as on alternative forms of transport.

the evolution of cars, and I will emphasize on the ownership and use of cars in British, as well as on alternative forms of transport. XnJNO
In this essay I will talk about the evolution of cars, and I will emphasize on the ownership and use of cars in British, as well as on alternative forms of transport. Nowadays, cars are the most known and common way of transport in British and in the world. Due to the fact that these last years we have increased not only the production of cars, but also the excessive use of them, everyday we are overgrowing cars on roads. However, there are many alternatives of transport we can use to reduce the use of cars. In other words, bicycles, public transport, and even walking, are great alternatives instead of using cars. Besides, using another way of transport brings benefits to your health, as you become more active and consequently you exercise, it also helps the environment, by decreasing the pollution, and lastly, we would see a reduction in car accidents and minor traffic. As a result, laws have appeared to control this issue. For example, in Mexico City an extreme use of cars was shown. Therefore, the government had to take action and set limits. This led to a change in the routine Mexican citizens had, but it has changed in a good way. Most of the people follow the rules and guidelines they ask for, but the owners that don't obey get different taxes. To conclude, I agree that there has been an increase in the use of cars, and as people we should take action to help it. For this reason, it seems to me that we should encourage people to reduce the buying and use of cars and implement the transport alternatives mentioned and also carpooling. In addition, I think laws should be introduced as they have been in different countries of the world.
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cars
in British,
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Nowadays,
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cars
are the most known and common way of
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transport
in British and in the world. Due to the fact that these last years we have increased not
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only
the production of
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cars
,
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also
the excessive
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use
of them, everyday we are overgrowing
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cars
on roads.

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, there are
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many
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alternatives
of
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transport
we can
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use
to
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reduce
the
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of
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cars
.
In other words
, bicycles, public
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transport
, and even walking, are great
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alternatives
instead
of using
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cars
.
Besides
, using another way of
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transport
brings benefits to your health, as you become more active and
consequently
you exercise, it
also
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helps
the environment, by decreasing the pollution, and
lastly
, we would
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see
a reduction in
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car
accidents and minor traffic.

As a result
, laws have appeared to control this issue.
For example
, in Mexico City an extreme
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use
of
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cars
was shown
.
Therefore
, the
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government
had to take action and set limits. This led to a
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change
in the routine Mexican citizens had,
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but
it has
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changed
in a
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good
way. Most of the
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people
follow the
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and guidelines they
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,
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the owners that don't obey
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get
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agree
that there has been an increase in the
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use
of
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cars
, and as
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people
we should take action to
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help
it.
For this reason
, it seems to me that we should encourage
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people
to
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reduce
the buying and
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use
of
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cars
and implement the
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transport
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alternatives
mentioned and
also
carpooling.
In addition
, I
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think
laws should
be introduced
as they have been in
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different
countries of the world.
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IELTS essay the evolution of cars, and I will emphasize on the ownership and use of cars in British, as well as on alternative forms of transport.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
298 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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