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favourite sprot leiuse activitive

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I like sport and I can play many sport. But I like play badminton the most. I played badminton since I was a child. Then I played with my dad. It is very happy time. Now I often go to park near my house and play with my friends in guesthouses on weekend. I also plaed and won in badminton competitions. Play badminton is very good for your health, help you relax after long day busy. I very like play badminton.
I like sport and I can
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IELTS essay favourite sprot leiuse activitive

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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