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The environmental problems that todaty's world is facing are so greate that there is little ordinary pepole can do to improve the situation.So governments and large organisations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extend do you agree or disagree

The environmental problems that todaty's world is facing are so greate that there is little ordinary pepole can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organisations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. 8Rel
In recent years, humanity is facing numerous environmental problems. However, the necessity to treat and prevent these from happening has become a big factor in society. Some people believe that these problems in modern world are significantly bigger that a normal individual is less qualified to solve them, also they argue that governments and large conglomerates should take responsibility to decrease the detrimental effects on environment. In my opinion, I partially agree with this view, I believe that even though there is much greater responsibility for governments and private organizations but i also think that every individual can take some actions on their own. Firstly, governments and large companies contain significant resources to control the deterring effects on environment. Indeed, it is the responsibility of local governments to solve various problems in their nation. In addition, private companies can also initiate many actions to prevent the environment. Both can have great impact on society and it is easy for people with power to solve much harder problems. For instance, Google runs almost all of its companies on renewable energy sources like solar and wind energy, actions like these can act as a model to inspire others to do their part. Also, it is obvious that governments and companies are expected to help society, Since they have much higher social responsibility. Although, companies and governments are solving harder problems, every individual can also take part to do certain activities which greatly impact the society. If every person cared and performed things within their power, effects of problems like climate change can be reduced or even eradicated. To illustrate, planting saplings to balance the effects of greenhouse gases can play a important role in tackling global warming. So, it is obvious that it not the sole responsibility of big powers but also everyone can help for a greater good. To conclude, this essay discussed about how governments and conglomerates are critical in facing environmental issues and also explained briefly the importance of every individual in it. In my view, I believe that environmental issues require a shared motive and also, demand the participation of every individual to grow a green future.
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these from happening has become a
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big
factor in
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society
.
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people
believe that these
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problems
in modern world are
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significantly bigger
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individual
is less qualified to solve them,
also
they argue that
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governments
and large conglomerates should take
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responsibility
to decrease the detrimental effects on environment. In my opinion, I
partially
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agree
with this view, I believe that
even though
there is much greater
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responsibility
for
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governments
and private organizations
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but
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also
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individual
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some
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own
.
Firstly
,
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governments
and large
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companies
contain significant resources to control the deterring effects on environment.
Indeed
, it is the
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responsibility
of local
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governments
to solve various
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problems
in their nation.
In addition
, private
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companies
can
also
initiate
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many
actions to
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prevent
the environment. Both can have great impact on
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society
and it is easy for
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people
with power to solve much harder
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problems
.
For instance
, Google runs almost all of its
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companies
on renewable energy sources like solar and wind energy, actions like these can act as a model to inspire others to do their part.
Also
, it is obvious that
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governments
and
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companies
are
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expected
to
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help
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society
, Since they have much higher social
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responsibility
. Although,
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companies
and
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governments
are solving harder
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problems
, every
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individual
can
also
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take part
to do certain activities which
greatly
impact the
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society
. If every person cared and performed things within their power, effects of
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problems
like climate
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change
can be
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reduced
or even eradicated. To illustrate, planting saplings to balance the effects of greenhouse gases can play
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role in tackling global warming.
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responsibility
of
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big
powers
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but
also
everyone can
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help
for a greater
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To conclude
, this essay
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discussed about how
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governments
and conglomerates are critical in facing environmental issues and
also
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explained
briefly
the importance of every
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individual
in it. In my view, I believe that environmental issues require a shared motive and
also
, demand the participation of every
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individual
to grow a green future.
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IELTS essay The environmental problems that todaty's world is facing are so greate that there is little ordinary pepole can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organisations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
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5.5
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