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The employees in all organizations have to dress smartly. Do you agree with the writer's view? Why? Why not?

The employees in all organizations have to dress smartly. Do you agree with the writer's view? Why? Why not? DwVRp
I am agreed with the writer’ s view that the employees in all organizations have to dress smartly. Dressing sense shows the worth of a person in a company. The apperance doesn’t reflect your knowledge but it shows the image, traditions and corporate culture. When the employees dress formally, it means they loyal and respect company discipline. Besides, an attractive, professional and suitable outfit can deliver a good impression to the customer. It might be an essential impact on the buiness collaboration. In conclusion, I believe that apperance is really imporant factor in business.
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IELTS essay The employees in all organizations have to dress smartly. Do you agree with the writer's view? Why? Why not?

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