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paper clips production process

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The flowchart provides the information of how paper clips made with plastic are produced in a in three colors; red, blue and yellow in a small factory. The process generally includes different stages such as coloring the molten plastic, checking quality, sorting by hand, checking colors whether mixture or single and packaging and dispatching. The first of the production of paper clips starts when the molten plastic is colored with red, blue or yellow. After that, they are checked with machine to control the quality if they are strong enough and reject the unqualified ones. After passing the checking stage, they are sorted by hand to differentiate whether mixed colors or single colors. The next stage is the quality control process to check if the colors are either mixture or single ones and if the result is not sure, the process will have to be started from the step of sorting again. Following that, packing and dispatching the products is the final stage of producing colored plastic paper clips.

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small
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different
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stages
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plastic
, checking quality, sorting by hand, checking colors whether mixture or single and packaging and dispatching.

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first
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starts
 when the molten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
is colored
 with red, blue or yellow. After that, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 with machine to control the quality if they are strong This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 and reject the unqualified ones. After passing the checking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, they are sorted
 by hand to differentiate whether mixed colors or single colors.

The next
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stage
 is the quality control process to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 if the colors are either mixture or single ones and if the result is not sure, the process will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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started
 from the step of sorting again. Following that, packing and dispatching the products is the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 of producing colored You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
 paper clips. 