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The elderly should live in a nursing home

The elderly should live in a nursing home LwW2R

Firstly, our family cannot deny to talk about duty of the son and daughter. With a family that is always by our side since we were small, our parents would always make time for us when we needed them even though they are busy with their work. We owe our parents time. So, when we were adult, we have to be responsible to our parents. For instance, we get so busy in our adult lives that we often forget to make time for them and at least call our parent to ask their health. Therefore, I am convinced that, the daughter and the son should be responsibility to be a care-giver to elderly people.

Firstly
, our family cannot deny to talk about duty of the son and daughter. With a family that is
 always by our side since we were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
, our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 would always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 time for us when we needed them even though
 they are busy with their work. We owe our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, when we were adult, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be responsible to our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
. For instance
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 busy in our adult This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 forget to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 time for them and at least call our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parent
 to ask their health. Therefore
, I am convinced
 that, the daughter and the son should be responsibility to be a care-giver to elderly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. 