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Some people think that we should work for a company before starting our own business. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that we should work for a company before starting our own business. NM59m

I totally agree with opinion that people should work for a company before starting our own business. This is the primary reason why people are not only able to accumulate more experience, which made their stronger and better, but also can set some money aside for investing their business in the future. Jeff Bezos, ‘’richest man in modern history’’, worked at fintech telecommunications start-up, banking industry, . . . before founder Amazon. Therefore, if you are individual in a company, you should broaden your experience, provide better educational opportunities, which useful for starting own business.

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