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If electronic books will be free no one will buy printed books and magazines. To what extent you agree or disagree

If electronic books will be free no one will buy printed books and magazines. To what extent you agree or disagree pJ2y0
The modern advancements have led us to a point when we can read everything in the electronic versions, and as a result, the question of whether printed media could be replaced completely by the electronic ones can claim to be a key possibility, particularly if it is completely free. However, I feel that paper versions have some specific irreplaceable qualities and the possibility of absolutely free books and magazines is narrow. Firstly, it has been seen many times that complementary products suddenly appeared with subscription packages after acquiring substantial clients. YouTube is a perfect example in this case -- started with providing free contents, and later started to offer quality items only with premium membership once it achieved customer's loyalty. Consequently, it can be narrowed down to the possibility that news media and ebooks would follow the same business strategy, and people will end up buying them probably at a much cheaper price than the printed forms. Secondly, the best writers, columnists and journalists will be writing for the best platforms, and it is not wrong to assume that these will not be free of cost. It is the question of the survival issue of the content creators and content publishing platforms. Therefore, it can be said that the free resources will be lacking in quality and reliability, and the general tendency of people is to search for free products but when they need quality they are not reluctant to pay the finest price. Finally, intensive study requires a great deal of time and screen in this case is not the best option. Paper has no side effects such as increasing eye pressure or developing insomnia, but screen is guilty of both. For these reasons, even if ebooks and e-magazines are free of charge there will always be demand for the physical forms for many. On the other hand, if some resources manage to remain free of charge, because of the Physical consequences and sometimes even for personal preferences, printed books and magazines will still be in demand among a certain group of people. In conclusion, to survive the publishing industry will always need to find some way to generate money for itself and the people depending on it. Therefore, it is impossible for the industry to become free, and on the other hand, papers with its health benefits and some intangible qualities will always remain alive among certain people.
The modern advancements have led us to a point when we can read everything in the electronic versions, and
as a result
,
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the question of whether
printed media could
be replaced
completely by the electronic ones can claim to be a key possibility,
particularly
if it is completely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
.
However
, I feel that paper versions have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
specific irreplaceable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
qualities
and the possibility of
absolutely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
books and magazines is narrow.

Firstly
, it has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
times that complementary products
suddenly
appeared with subscription packages after acquiring substantial clients. YouTube is a perfect example
in this case
--
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
with providing
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free
contents, and later
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to offer
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quality
items
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
with premium membership once it achieved customer's loyalty.
Consequently
, it can
be narrowed
down to the possibility that news media and
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ebooks
would follow the same business strategy, and
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people
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
up buying them
probably
at a much cheaper price than the printed forms.

Secondly
, the best writers, columnists and journalists will be writing for the best platforms, and it is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
to assume that these will not be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
of cost. It is the question of the survival issue of the content creators and content publishing platforms.
Therefore
, it can
be said
that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
resources will be lacking in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
and reliability, and the general tendency of
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people
is to search for
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free
products
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but
when they need
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quality
they are not reluctant to pay the finest price.

Finally
, intensive study requires a great deal of time and screen
in this case
is not the best option. Paper has no side effects such as increasing eye pressure or developing insomnia,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
screen is guilty of both. For these reasons, even if
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ebooks
and e-magazines are
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free
of charge there will always be demand for the physical forms for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
.

On the other hand
, if
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some
resources manage to remain
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free
of charge,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the Physical consequences and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
even for personal preferences, printed books and magazines will
still
be in demand among a certain group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

In conclusion
, to survive the publishing industry will always need to find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
way to generate money for itself and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
depending on it.
Therefore
, it is impossible for the industry to become
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
, and
on the other hand
, papers with its health benefits and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
intangible
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
qualities
will always remain alive among certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
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IELTS essay If electronic books will be free no one will buy printed books and magazines. To what extent you agree or disagree

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  American English
6 paragraphs
400 words
6.0
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