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The effect of pollution on health

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The main ecologically caused human diseases are associated with poor quality of air, water, noise. pollution and exposure to electromagnetic and ultraviolet radiation. Many studies have shown a relationship between indoor and outdoor air pollution, water and soil pollution from hazardous chemicals, and noise stress and the development of respiratory and cardiovascular diseases, cancer, asthma, allergies, and reproductive and central nervous disorders systems Children are a special risk group. The activities of many international environmental organizations are aimed at protecting the health of children and reducing the share of environmentally related diseases in this age group. The little-studied harmful effects of small doses of chemicals on the human body are of great concern. It is assumed that the damaging effects of various chemicals can indirectly affect several generations. Commonly used preservatives and persistent chemicals in food production to improve the taste and presentation of foods can pose a serious health hazard The accumulation of chemicals in the soil can lead to contamination of crops, pollution of ground and surface waters and ultimately adverse effects on the human body. Thus soil degradation caused by human economic activity is also indirectly related to human health Остав
The main
ecologically
caused
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human
diseases
are associated
with poor quality of air, water, noise.
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pollution
and exposure to electromagnetic and ultraviolet radiation.
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Many
studies have shown a relationship between indoor and outdoor air
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pollution
, water and soil
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pollution
from hazardous
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chemicals
, and noise
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stress
and the development of respiratory and cardiovascular diseases, cancer, asthma, allergies, and reproductive and central nervous disorders
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systems


Children are a special
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risk
group. The activities of
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many
international environmental organizations
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are


aimed at protecting the health of children and reducing the share of
environmentally
related diseases in

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this
age group.

The
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little
-studied harmful effects of
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small
doses of
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chemicals
on the
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human
body are of great concern.

It
is assumed
that the damaging effects of various
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chemicals
can
indirectly
affect several generations.
Commonly
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used
preservatives and persistent
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chemicals
in food production to
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improve
the taste and presentation of foods can pose a serious health hazard The accumulation of
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chemicals
in the soil can lead to contamination of crops,
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pollution
of ground
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and


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surface
waters and
ultimately
adverse effects on the
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human
body.
Thus
soil degradation caused
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by


human economic activity is
also
indirectly
related to
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human
health

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IELTS essay The effect of pollution on health

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
193 words
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