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How to protect sustainable tourism

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Sustainable tourism is a form of tourism respecting both local people and the travelers, cultural heritage and environment while providing an exciting and educational tourism. Therefore, it is vital to have possible solutions to promote sustainable tourism. First, the visitors have to respect the local culture in order not to lose local’s identity. Then, they have to dress appropriately, learn a bit of the local language and protect historical monuments. Moreover, choosing local restaurants and supporting their products handicrafts or souvenirs can maintain the craft villages of the local region. For one thing, in Italy, to visit a church or temple such as the Pantheon or the Vatican, women are required to cover their shoulders, or take a cardigan or a shawl with make sure they do not wear short shorts or a mini-skirt. Thus, not only do visitors rapidly spread the country’s beauty to the world, but they also ensure that future generations can enjoy the beauty of a country.
Sustainable
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is a form of
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respecting both
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local
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people
and the travelers, cultural heritage and environment while providing an exciting and educational
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tourism
.
Therefore
, it is vital to have possible solutions to promote sustainable
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tourism
.
First
, the visitors
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have to
respect the
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local
culture in order not to lose
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local’s
identity. Then, they
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have to
dress
appropriately
, learn a bit of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
language and protect historical monuments.
Moreover
, choosing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
restaurants and supporting their products handicrafts or souvenirs can maintain the craft villages of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
region. For one thing, in Italy, to visit a church or temple such as the Pantheon or the Vatican, women
are required
to cover their shoulders, or take a cardigan or a shawl with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure they do not wear short shorts or a mini-skirt.
Thus
, not
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only
do visitors
rapidly
spread the country’s beauty to the world,
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but
they
also
ensure that future generations can enjoy the beauty of a country.

IELTS essay How to protect sustainable tourism

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161 words
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