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How can we raise public awareness about reusing or recycling?

How can we raise public awareness about reusing or recycling? YwqjB
On the surface raising awareness is white-collar's duty however I say either governor and families should educate people. I wholeheartedly believe no one can force anyone else to do something unless describes her/him its benefits and then they will welcome it. At first place, since money is a crucial icon for each family, in my point of view first solution is describing the profits of reusing and recycling and tell families how much exactly they can save by doing these and how these affects their financial issues. At second place, executive directors like governmental organizations should remind people repetitively the importance of surviving environment, ordinary people resist against accepting this issues but it can not be neglected how much reusing and recycling would affects our life generally. In my opinion The governor should provide conditions (such as a fair or a showroom of pollution) that those people could sense harms of nonconformity of doing these reusing and recycling directly. To conclude, I think maybe people refuse these solution at initial contact but at the end they ponder the situation and figure out the best way of their lives based on benefits it could be have for them.
On the surface raising awareness is white-collar's duty
however
I say either governor and families should educate
people
. I
wholeheartedly
believe no one can force anyone else to do something unless
describes
her/him its
benefits and
then they will welcome it.

At
first
place, since money is a crucial icon for each family, in my point of view
first
solution is describing the profits of reusing and recycling and
tell
families how much exactly they can save by doing these and how these affects their financial issues.

At second place, executive directors like governmental organizations should remind
people
repetitively
the importance of surviving environment, ordinary
people
resist against accepting this issues
but
it can not
be neglected
how much reusing and recycling would
affects
our life
generally
. In my opinion The governor should provide conditions (such as a
fair
or a showroom of pollution) that those
people
could sense harms of nonconformity of doing these reusing and recycling
directly
.

To conclude
, I
think
maybe
people
refuse
these solution
at initial contact
but
at the
end
they ponder the situation and figure out the best way of their
lives
based on benefits it could be
have
for them.
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IELTS essay How can we raise public awareness about reusing or recycling?

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