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BEING A VEGETARIAN IS GOOD OR NOT?

BEING A VEGETARIAN IS GOOD OR NOT? 75Qx3

WE ALL KNOW THAT FOOD GIVES US ENERGY AND THE ABILITY TO GREW AND PERFORM OUR ACTIVITIES. WE ALL EAT FOOD TO GAIN HEALTH AND GOOD LIVING. SOME PEOPLE EAT MEAT OR FISH BUT SOME PEOPLE DO NOT LIKE TO EAT. PEOPLE WHO EAT FLESH ARE CONSIDERED AS NON-VEGETARIAN, ON THE OTHER HAND PEOPLE WHO DO NOT EAT ANY ANIMAL ARE CONSIDERED AS VEGETARIAN. IF WE CONSIDER THE WORLD WE HAVE BOTH KINDS OF COMMUNITY AND WE HAVE DIFFERENT FORMS OF EATING PLACES WHICH SERVE BOTH CUISINES. I AM A VEGAN AND I BELIEVE THAT KILLING AN ANIMAL/BIRD/FISH FOR YOUR MOTIVE IS SIN, I DO NOT EVEN THINK TO EAT THEM ONCE. ACCORDING TO MY PERCEPTION, WE HAVE VARIOUS VARIETIES OF VEGETABLES AND FOODSTUFF IN THE MARKET FROM WHICH I CAN FULFILL MY TASTE BUDS AND MY HUNGER SO WHY SHOULD I KILL SOME LIVING BEING FOR THIS ON THE OTHER PART PEOPLE WHO EAT THE LIVING BEING THEY BELIEVE ITS A FOOD CIRCLE AND IF WE DO NOT KILL THEM THEY WILL KILL US AND EAT US, THEIR COUNT WILL INCREASE A LOT WHICH WILL BE DANGEROUS FOR EVERYONE, SO THE FOOD CHAIN SHOULD BE MAINTAINED. IN MY OPINION WITHOUT BEING CARNIVORES ALSO YOU CAN LIVE LIFE AND ENJOY YOUR MEAL. HERBIVORES ARE ALSO HEALTHY AND HAVE A FIT BODY THEY CAN ALSO PERFORM ALL DUTIES, TASKS PROPERLY. SO CHOOSE THE LIFE ACCORDINGLY WITHOUT DESTROYING OTHERS LIFE ONE SHOULD BE HAPPY IN THEIR LIFE.

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FOOD
 GIVES US ENERGY AND THE ABILITY TO GREW AND PERFORM OUR ACTIVITIES. WE ALL You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedchewdineinhalebitenibble
EAT
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FOOD
 TO GAIN HEALTH AND This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
GOOD
 LIVING.

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SOME
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PEOPLE
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EAT
 MEAT OR FISH This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
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SOME
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PEOPLE
 DO NOT LIKE TO You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedchewdineinhalebitenibble
EAT
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PEOPLE
 WHO You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedchewdineinhalebitenibble
EAT
 FLESH ARE CONSIDERED
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PEOPLE
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EAT
 ANY ANIMAL ARE CONSIDERED
 AS VEGETARIAN.

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DIFFERENT
 FORMS OF EATING PLACES WHICH SERVE BOTH CUISINES.

I AM A VEGAN AND I BELIEVE THAT KILLING AN ANIMAL/BIRD/FISH FOR YOUR MOTIVE IS SIN, I DO NOT EVEN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
THINK
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EAT
 THEM ONCE. ACCORDING TO MY PERCEPTION, WE HAVE VARIOUS VARIETIES OF VEGETABLES AND FOODSTUFF IN THE MARKET FROM WHICH I CAN FULFILL MY TASTE BUDS AND MY HUNGER This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 WHY SHOULD I KILL This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
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ON THE OTHER PART You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
PEOPLE
 WHO You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedchewdineinhalebitenibble
EAT
 THE LIVING BEING THEY BELIEVE Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?It'sIt is
ITS
 A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
FOOD
 CIRCLE AND IF WE DO NOT KILL THEM THEY WILL KILL US AND You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedchewdineinhalebitenibble
EAT
 US, THEIR COUNT WILL INCREASE A LOT WHICH WILL BE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
DANGEROUS
 FOR EVERYONE, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
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FOOD
 CHAIN SHOULD BE MAINTAINED
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IN MY OPINION WITHOUT BEING CARNIVORES ALSO
 YOU CAN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
LIVE
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LIFE
 AND ENJOY YOUR MEAL. HERBIVORES ARE ALSO
 HEALTHY AND HAVE A FIT BODY THEY CAN ALSO
 PERFORM ALL DUTIES, TASKS PROPERLY
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
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LIFE
ACCORDINGLY
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LIFE
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LIFE
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